You Thrill My Quill (I.)

by Melissa Arel

can't fight this craving
the need for five-seven-five
overtakes my will


Author's Note: Inspired from a conversation with Soulo about our haiku addictions! (Number One of a continuing series)

Posted on 01/28/2006
Copyright © 2020 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 01/28/06 at 05:43 AM

Love it! On to chapter two of the trilogy...(oh, and for some reason, the first line got Neil Diamond's 'Hooked on a feeling' stuck in my head. I know, it's silly).

Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 06/26/07 at 07:20 AM

HaHa! I know EXACTLY what you mean. Every time someone writes a haiku in my little poetry group, they say it's for me (because I usually have 1 or 2 every time we meet:) They're a good way to get your brain in gear for writing longer pieces.

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