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your space.
by Emily G Myersi have fallen in love
with the shape of your space
& the pillow
with eyelashes sleepily shed
or the smell of a blanket
as i'm falling asleep
somehow it's better
just to be near your sleep
my heart breathes a fire
my lips can't contain 01/24/2006 Author's Note: yes, the two do go together. kind of.
Posted on 01/24/2006
Copyright © 2024 Emily G Myers
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| Posted by Lori Johnson on 01/25/06 at 08:34 AM I like this for several different reasons, but what stands out the most is the last line..."my heart breathes a fire
my lips can't contain"...it just grabbed me & took hold.
Love it!
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| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/28/06 at 12:25 AM "my heart breathes a fire my lips can't contain" is a great final line. High marks all across. Nice work.
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