Like Father, Like Son by Kristina Woodhill
I see you two
Grinning there
Off to see the world again
Fishing poles in hand
Im glad you get
To spend some time
Together finally
Take the camera -
While youre hiking
Through the Wakhan Corridor
Snap some shots
Of Marco Polo sheep.
You didnt get to see
Any the last time
You two were there
New Zealand should
Be pretty nice
This time of year,
Maybe a bit rainy.
You can show Dad
Your catch and release
Fishing spots.
Hell just be thrilled
To be on a river
Again.
Youre right,
The Metolius in Oregon
Would be perfect
Wait for Spring, though
Its nasty cold there now.
Terry plans to spread
Your ashes on the river.
You wont want to miss that.
Mom and I will be along
In a bit
After our chores are done
Well pack a picnic,
Some raingear
Save some fish for us,
You hear.
01/09/2006
Author's Note: My dad died in 1979 at the age of 58. My brother died in 2005 at the age of 58. Sad, though oddly interesting, fact.
Posted on 01/10/2006 Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill
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Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 01/10/06 at 02:01 PM Kristina, at first I hadn't noticed the undertow in this; the moment I recognized the undertow - I felt it, and was pulled in so fast my heart stopped. This is richer each time I read it. (((Awesome writing))) |
Posted by Mara Meade on 01/12/06 at 01:46 AM Like sweet and faded photographs from a personal album, I feel as though I've just seen glimpses of your family through the eyes of time. |
Posted by David Hill on 01/31/06 at 01:09 AM This has an old fashioned flavor without ever seeming sappy, and as a trout angler, I can appreciate the setting. I will see ghost fisherman on the stream the next time I go fishing.
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Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/26/06 at 02:53 AM Reading it was like seeing a photograph of your family. Very vivid, vibrant and real. I saw the whole thing; like you were telling the story as a narrative. Excellent write! |
Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 07/16/06 at 05:49 AM Memories escapulated even as the fish were caught. This is lovely. |
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