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Achew! Haiku
by Soulo Jacob BourgeauSniffle sniffle bug
My lungs and throat despise you
Bane of the immune 01/04/2006
Author's Note: Dedicated to and inspired by Arianna Woods
**More senryu than haiku - I realize this**
Posted on 01/05/2006
Copyright © 2024 Soulo Jacob Bourgeau
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 01/05/06 at 04:47 PM sounds like what I endured with bronchitis and flu before Christmas. I really like this, good work and fun too |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/05/06 at 05:59 PM Really like how today's poets have expanded the traditional territory of haiku beyond nature, as is the case here. Nice work! |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 01/08/06 at 05:38 AM oh, why do I adore the word "bane"? (sniffle-cloggy-catchy-you!) Love the haiku! —Jill :) |
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