Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 12/18/05 at 03:24 PM well, one good thing for me is the Players or other brands aren't in my life. But yes, we've all done our gamboling and ironically I was thinking the other day how smokers must be also inherent gambolers to one degree or another. Good poem. Good luck with the tickets and everything. |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/18/05 at 08:26 PM So true, Chris. Life offers us so many sure ways of getting nothing for something. Enjoyed these thoughts of yours. Thanks. |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 12/19/05 at 01:00 AM Quite a comparison! Gambl;ing and smoking! (From my perspective neither a good choice). Care with detail is the added plus in the writing of this ironic piece. |
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 12/19/05 at 01:00 AM Now I have to go out and get lotto....great trip through the checkout stand with you! |
Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 12/21/05 at 12:33 AM Succinct, and as mentioned, quite wry, simply excellent and excellently simple.... d:-) |
Posted by Christina Bruno on 12/21/05 at 06:07 PM very nice and witty. i hope you win the lotto instead ;) |
Posted by J. P. Davies on 12/23/05 at 04:11 AM Oh yes, I am the same way when I grab ny pack of Captain Black sweets. Should stop. |
Posted by Lauren Singer on 12/28/05 at 05:08 AM ahh yes, very familiar with this gamble. enjoyed this wholly, as i usually do your poetry. and happy holidays, chris! |