Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Tom Goss on 12/13/05 at 06:34 PM pleasing descriptions here, and a tight form |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/13/05 at 07:51 PM Stunning visuals here; sounds like a cross between Monet and Mately. Nice also in finishing practically with the same stanza. |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/14/05 at 12:43 AM Wonderful....like a haiku, in six part harmony! |
Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 12/18/05 at 04:15 AM the floral imagery makes its own noise in this piece. a wonderful captivating shot...i feel like i'd been there before. amazing how a plant can provide so much life to one room. nice. |