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CRYOGENIC KISS

by Terry Olynik

December winds shriek
Leaving me - like our last kiss
Cold to the marrow.

12/01/2005

Author's Note: A haiku frozen in time.

Posted on 12/01/2005
Copyright © 2024 Terry Olynik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/02/05 at 01:26 AM

Terry, you have finally done it. You've written a poem with a built in wind chill factor! Great read. Thanks.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/02/05 at 05:54 PM

Definite haiku impact, straight from the Great White North.

Posted by Sarah Graves on 12/05/05 at 10:59 PM

I love this.. this visual that you convey to the reader is penetrating. +fav. *Sadistic Sarah* hehe. :)

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/07/05 at 09:05 AM

Ouch! You'd better leave those ice maidens alone and get Persephone away from Hades to warm the earth again. Congrats on #1.
~Chelle~

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