eve of the hurricane by Carolyn Covillewhile waters surge past shorelines,
as winds whip through trees and beat up window panes...
we dance salsa over the tiles of your living room
I, in a maroon night slip,
you, in only a white bath towel around your waist
from merengue to bachata you hold me tighter,
belting out the words as you guide me
I laugh as you spin me faster,
the turns get more complicated but I never lose you
moments later, I'm falling asleep with your warm body wrapped around mine
your soft kisses make me forget the predicted storm
despite the uncertainty, despite the speculation
we can only wait to see what tomorrow brings
11/03/2005 Posted on 11/09/2005 Copyright © 2024 Carolyn Coville
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Christina Bruno on 11/30/05 at 04:12 AM i love this sense of trust..i've felt it before... nice imagery :) |
Posted by Max Bouillet on 12/14/05 at 09:05 PM There is strength in facing the unknown when two people can reassure each other. Beautiful poem filled with motion and emotion. Great read. |
Posted by Meghan Helmich on 01/15/09 at 12:55 PM i really feel like i'm in that opening dance. you've got some beautiful things going on here, carolyn. congrats on potd. |
Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 01/15/09 at 03:25 PM Very descriptive. Congrats on POTD! |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/15/09 at 04:39 PM A fine POTD! Congrats! |
Posted by George Hoerner on 01/16/09 at 01:00 AM All I can say is you Oregoneans sure have a great group of poets. Nice write. |
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