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Love Redefined

by Rula Shin


As WE found US

Love found justification

In the presence of our BEING

Let Love boast of its leap

Merging into endlessness

Redefined as US, Love

09/23/2005

Posted on 11/07/2005
Copyright © 2024 Rula Shin

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Laura Doom on 11/10/05 at 11:17 PM

Love is often regarded as a 'constant' - whereas it is, in essence, redefined in each instance, a uniquely intimate and personal synthesis. A profoundly simple and simply profound affirmation :>

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/11/05 at 04:01 PM

Much strength of expression in this piece's brevity Rula. I like!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 11/12/05 at 02:59 AM

Can love ever attain a height, so much that not only love gets redefined or finds its very justification but it also gets metamorphosed in to lovers, so much so that there are no lovers just love (boasting of its new found heights) in the being of these lovers? I don’t know if your words are depicting this abstract idea or it’s an attainment of Nirvana in unison, driven by these refined energies. These are the most beautiful words I have ever read on the bliss of love. This epitomization of love has never ever been heard before. Lovers always attain a degree of love. In your depiction it’s the love which attains new meaning in lovers. I wonder if this kind of a love belongs to this self centered world. I wonder if you belong to some other world. Needless to say that I like this abstract idea of love.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/15/05 at 09:41 PM

Rula, your words here are remarkable. In them, I feel you show that love, THE FEELING, is a fruit of love, the verb. Thanks.

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 11/16/05 at 01:06 AM

...rula, and i's expecting a rula-write and lo and behold you tell-of-the-world-o'-humanity in a few words...only you, dear one, touche touche! and the peeps above me are soooome good writes themselves and i echo every thing they said[and i know this sounds maudlin and trite, so lash me], i read and re-read this and loved it a hunnerd different ways...each line is a walk and yet can be joined to another...so lovely, peace, chaz

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