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Redemption, In Cream and in Crimson

by Trisha De Gracia

And
I am not
your angel, I
shall not be used
to open your
white wings of ivory
your crimson
love sonnets
your dripping perfection
so that
you can see it,
I
will not
be the one
to run
your flags through
the wet clouds
and pray.

Yet
I prey on
your travesties
prey on your innocence
smeared and
bloodied with
tongues and tapestries
woven of
doves wings
and olive and
sin.

Still
I hold your halo
roughened
softened
gritty and warm
and tarnished
hold it in the hands you kiss
the face you miss and the
stories that had
us all in them.

I
am astounded
for you
steal the words
from my lips
with your
fingers and
keep them like
birds
or bats
or monarchs,
stroke them
and strain them
and sigh.

This
is a throw away
poem. You
can not keep
these words from
this page,
and I won't
allow
              the
                  sharp


intake
           of
                  breath


    or

           redemption





        Just yet.




11/04/2005

Posted on 11/04/2005
Copyright © 2024 Trisha De Gracia

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 05/13/06 at 07:12 AM

Excellent form for this unusual, biting, yet firmly gentle (if that makes sense)POTD. Count me among your new fans.

Posted by Christel Crews on 05/13/06 at 04:00 PM

what a powerful piece ... it feels like a mental tangent that is never spoken yet it needs to be released.. the first stanza caught my eye and the last just stole my heart..

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/14/06 at 04:25 AM

Most excellent! Great power in these words and your resolve. +fav

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 05/14/06 at 05:59 AM

Trisha, a beautiful, strong declaration. Congratulations on POTD!
~Chelle~

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/16/06 at 01:26 PM

I admire the powerful gentle completeness in this fine declaration. Great poetry! —Jill

Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 05/21/06 at 04:52 AM

powerful. unforgettable. congrats on POTD. PK

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