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by Charlie Morgan

i'm gonna start my poem with this line.

then, i'll break a space
[for the pondering thought of the reader]
and put another line here,
[to continue the reader's thought]
and then i'll the end
the first stanza with
this short line.

so now i'll switch mind-sets
[of the unsuspecting reader]
and make a question mark
out of a colon,
and all of this is done
by adding these last
two lines
like
this.

i'm a neophyte-surgeon, reaching
into your head and stirring
all your thoughts around
by adding this line and
the next two
but
with

an


extra space
for EMPHASIS.

then i'll close with this line.
[and sigh from having changed the world.]

11/03/2005

Posted on 11/03/2005
Copyright © 2025 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/03/05 at 03:47 PM

ars gratia artis....and a fine example as well. Thanks, Chaz...

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/03/05 at 07:30 PM

Quite the clever expression Chaz. So much so that other poets can only kick themselves for not having thought of it first. Perhaps these words in the first stanza should be reversed: and then i'll the end

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/06/05 at 04:19 AM

This one has me spaced out Chas. Fun!...Charlie

Posted by Kimberly Rhode on 11/07/05 at 08:32 AM

I feel like I just learned something..

Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 11/07/05 at 09:32 PM

I thought things felt different in the world today..must be your poetic process piece pal... ergo ego hath done it again, Magoo! - RCatski

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