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by Ava Blu

I sat outside tonight until
my hands turned blue;

I just wanted
[I just needed]

to be numb from you.


Posted on 10/26/2005
Copyright © 2021 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 08/16/06 at 04:17 AM

I don't think I ever read these... sorry Ikind of fell off of here :) still as good as I remember though. I miss the competition :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/22/06 at 02:11 PM

Fitting tribute to one of my own favourite months, having been born on the 30th, though have to say early fall (September to mid October) is my favourite time of year; no insects, warm during the day, cool at night...great for sleeping with an open window. :o)

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