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Country Pumpkin

by Adrian Calhoun

He sat here all day,
practicing his evil grin,
just waiting for someone to frighten.

The light faded into darkness,
and his face was lit for the occassion.
As the night went on,
and the fog settled in,
nobody came to see him.

By the next morning,
his face had grown weary,
and his flame was extinguished.

Poor guy never heard a single scream,
not even from the kids of the house,
but he sure scared the dogs.

He lived and died alone on the porch.
An entire lifetime wasted that night,
just so we could say, Happy Halloween.

10/20/2005

Posted on 10/21/2005
Copyright © 2024 Adrian Calhoun

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 10/23/05 at 03:08 PM

Oh I love this Adrian! What a lonely pumpkin and you give him such life. Great read for the season!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/26/05 at 12:47 AM

Poor pitiful pumpkin! But what fun carving it and placing it on the porch. Right? Or was it a plastic one? Sad take undeed then. But there is always another year with perhaps better luck! Pleasant read!

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/28/05 at 07:12 AM

Congrats on carving yourself out the POTD!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/28/05 at 02:31 PM

Fun seasonal read Adrian. Really enjoyed how you gave the pumpkin some humanity, if only for a day. Happy Halloween and congrats on POTD! :o)

Posted by Michelle Calhoun on 10/28/05 at 09:40 PM

What a festive holiday read. You really brought the little punkin' to life if only for one day.A well deserved congrats for POTD!!! XOXOXO Michelle & Baby Calhoun ;)

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/28/05 at 10:28 PM

Congratulations on POTD! This is funny and sad at the same time. What a good father you are. There will be many more pumpkins...Thanksgiving is coming...OH BOY! Pumpking Pie!
~Chelle~

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 10/28/05 at 10:43 PM

Congratulations for poem of the day Cal. Fun bumpkin pumpkin poem...Charlie

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