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i wonder ...

by Charlie Morgan



i type away furiously like i'm swatting
at tse-tse flies.

and i know he's written something,
she has too.

wonder what she is saying?
him too, for that matter.

but, oh well, i gotta type words
that would melt the stars.

i don't have time to read
just any staid words.

mine move, wonder if his does?
or hers?

too bad i'll never really know,
especially because i think i do already.

09/29/2005

Posted on 09/29/2005
Copyright © 2025 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alastre Zidler on 10/01/05 at 02:36 PM

Quite an interesting piece. Brings to mind the constant conflict I know I face every time I sit down to write, of the epic battle between that ever elusive pride in my own work vs. reverence and deferrence (sp?) to the awe-inspiring work of others. Just gotta keep swatting flies I suppose - love that image by the way! A great overall poem, Charlie.

Posted by Laura Doom on 10/01/05 at 11:43 PM

I know I think what you mean, but then, what do I know? I mean to think about it...a tight journey into the communal unknown - made me smile :)

Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/05/05 at 05:11 AM

Honesty like this is so characteristic of you, my friend. I am so good. I never judge. I am a nice guy. ... and Charlie is Charlie... right there out in front of us and the world. Courage... that's what you have. Bang when his poem!

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