carbon copy

by Tricia Marie Miel

the common thread
binding steel and being human
is found in the basic chemistry
of their carbon content.
so they taught,
but it goes beyond that-

organic and synthetic have their analogies,
and their contradictions,
and their head-on collisions:
soul and substance,
logic and emotion.
challenge comes in the
reconciliation of both-

tell me how
when the threshold slides along the spectrum
and the degrees in between blur
no longer right, nor wrong
only a matter of choice, then consequence-
only relative.

a world of steel has made nerves of steel
a necessary
framework to support the fragility
pride would rather repress

the fire that quenches steel,
the fire that consumes soul-
analogous, but not to be confused
as equal

steel bends, soul weakens
shaped by elements
forceful enough, gentle enough
to cause a reaction,
to leave an impression.

do not mistake
my resilience for absence
of vulnerability

i may be steel, but i'm also human
accept the contradictions
forgive the imperfections
see me as i am
not as you want me to be

lest i be just the carbon copy.


Author's Note: and that, my kryptonite, would be my undoing.

Posted on 09/17/2005
Copyright © 2022 Tricia Marie Miel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/16/19 at 04:47 PM

Congrats on POTD! I'm glad to get the chance to read this one. Loved the contrasts in this.

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