| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/11/05 at 08:43 PM Exceptionally powerful, Max. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/12/05 at 12:50 AM A fascinating take on Rev. 6:16. Indeed a commentary on people as individuals and on society as a whole. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 09/13/05 at 12:21 AM i love dream catchers, i wanted to get one for my car but i couldn't find one...fabulous images of nightmares painted into reality...spookey ;0 |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 09/13/05 at 04:00 AM this is one of the best pieces I've seen at pathetic. fascinating use of metaphor. |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 09/14/05 at 02:10 AM This is an image-rich, somewhat dark, piece of writing, Br Max. The images, darkly sublime. Thanks for sharing. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 09/15/05 at 02:45 AM having been "absent" from dear pathetic for some time now, it is such a joy to take a small moment and enjoy your devilishly good poetry... excellent... blessings... |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/19/05 at 04:20 AM You are a dreamcatcher with this poem Max. Very
well done Charlie |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 09/21/05 at 03:21 AM You, Max, have caught our dreams and shown the nightmare lurking in all of us. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 10/11/05 at 07:02 PM ...and life shrivels to the size of a contract... |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 11/14/05 at 04:56 PM painted by a true artist - extended applause at potd |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/14/05 at 05:52 PM Captivatingly different description of 'old scratch,' Max. Well done and congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/14/05 at 10:33 PM Buffeting. An excellent POTD. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/15/05 at 02:22 AM Congratulations on poem of the day Max...Charlie |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 11/15/05 at 04:22 AM A great choice for POTD. Congratulations, Max |
| Posted by Thomas K. Hunt on 11/15/05 at 06:07 AM The imagery is outstanding Max, This peom just pulled me in...I've read about Dreamcatchers. And I've always been fasinated by dreams...most of mine are so vivid they affect my whole day at times..Excellent read and congrats on your POTD...well deserved |
| Posted by Rhonda Maneki on 02/03/07 at 01:49 PM I love this poem - and dream catchers - the brush of life paints vividly from your hand images - to words.
Thank you, |
