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four haiku
by Jim Benz
ripples cross
the reflection of her face
watching water bugs
so many fireflies
blinking on the forest edge
campfire flickers
my old red truck
idles by the bee yard
next to bear scat
an old clothes line
bends beneath a heavy load
ripe with grapes
09/02/2005
Author's Note: fond farewell to summer well spent
Posted on 09/02/2005
Copyright © 2024 Jim Benz
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/03/05 at 03:43 AM Beautiful imagery and word combinations. You serve the haiku form well. I could hear those water bugs in rhythm with the idle. Well done, indeed. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/06/05 at 04:20 PM Yes, you have captured the scene leaving impressions which will last for some time. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 09/06/05 at 04:27 PM Very beautiful scenes you have here Jim, all strung together to form ONE collective impression, a man merged in time with the nature. |
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