| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/23/05 at 09:06 PM I think most of us danced in the rain as children
when we didn't have a care in the world. well done Anita....Charlie |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 08/24/05 at 04:14 AM this is beautiful and sad. well done. |
| Posted by Felicia Aguilar on 08/24/05 at 05:56 PM Ah, the end was like a kick in the stomach. Hauntingly beautiful. |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 08/24/05 at 07:31 PM Very very well expressed.Compact and amazing. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 08/26/05 at 03:12 AM ahhh i know this well; i used to stand in the rain nude. |
| Posted by Brynn Dizack on 12/21/05 at 03:11 PM word. |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 05/20/07 at 04:47 PM Such a twist with your words here. Beautifully sad. Congratulations on your POTD. |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 05/20/07 at 07:23 PM Which only proves it is what is in us that makes the difference. And the realization is Progress.... |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 05/21/07 at 03:56 AM Oh, I love this, and yes it sure does appear that there's more rain coming from my eyes that from the sky. Sometimes, though, a good cry is so cleansing - I feel refreshed afterwards and ready to start again. CONGRATULATIONS on POTD!
~Chelle~
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| Posted by Laura Doom on 12/18/07 at 11:42 PM this is 'for her' - so I can't help but completely absorb it. Someday you can teach me brevity :) |
