| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/20/05 at 08:25 PM Very very good! The loon's call described as tremelo..quite unique, innovative, and so true, recalling that haunting sound. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 08/21/05 at 12:18 AM I agree completely with the use of tremolo. So much, in so little :) |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 09/02/05 at 12:08 PM Mmm - to come to life I need to substitute a bird whose call I know. (I've got no idea WHAT a loon is but assume its a bird!)But then it does, - this is a great little 'ku |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 09/02/05 at 12:15 PM Ah - it is a bird much as I imagined (though I went for a coot in my imagination) If you want to hear its call go to this sound file |
