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by Shonda Creemer

i keep writing letters
to you
of us
from my heart

i place them inside
safe

waiting for that moment
when you will discover them

sealed with a love that has never wavered
hopeful that one day its
penned affections will be answered

forever yours

08/18/2005

Posted on 08/19/2005
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/19/05 at 06:07 AM

Shon, sad and beautiful sentiments, expressing what never might be heard, yet keeping them there in case the opportunity ever becomes available. It will, although it may come unexpectedly from a different direction. Keep your heart and mind open to all possibilities. ;-)
~Chelle~

Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 08/21/05 at 12:37 AM

It leaves me hoping, for the sake of the narrator, that they are discovered and requited!

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 08/21/05 at 01:11 AM

I love this...he is real dearie...keep writing to him and someday he can read them!

Posted by Charles M Harrison on 07/31/06 at 10:41 AM

Wonderful poem. Congrats on poem of the day.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/31/06 at 01:53 PM

Beautiful in its brevity and hopefulness. Congrats on POTD!

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 07/31/06 at 07:59 PM

Congratulations on POTD!
~Chelle~

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 08/02/06 at 05:43 AM

This ink never dries! Belated congrats on potd, Shonda. Enjoyed every word!

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