| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/18/05 at 03:52 PM ...glenn, everything that michelle said!...for real...what a gracious way to describe something such as our moon, so personified, so lovely...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 08/18/05 at 11:01 PM And i can see her smiling coz u have knit her a beautiful dress made of words. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 08/20/05 at 02:14 AM Yes, the moon is so linked with our earth, our being, probably depending on us for her very survival. But, then this dependence affects us physically, emotionally and spiritually. It is said that we are the food for moon.Moon is the child of the earth. |
| Posted by Jeanne Marie Hoffman on 08/21/05 at 12:25 AM I love the way this envelopes the reader -- and I cannot explain exactly why, but I love the last line. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 08/22/05 at 08:26 PM This speaks to me so tenderly of that give and take relationship this earth has with her moon, is it any wonder that we too have a relationship with her? "she is frowning tonight
tilting her head downward
as if in shame
her waxing face
covered with earthshadow...her translucent veil
teases and confounds me
I crave her fullness" - with an invisible reach she does seem to touch us, as Ashok said, affecting us in so many ways both physical and spiritual. This is a beautiful tribute to her irreplaceable presence, we personify her glowing caress as she walks hand in hand with the earth in simple being. I like this so much Glenn. High marks.
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| Posted by Carolyn Coville on 09/01/05 at 03:23 AM beautiful! i love how this is written; the words and the imagery are simply awesome |
