At Coffee

by Uriel Tovar

my beanie made it
so that my
glasses fogged up.
I took them off
so i could see your
you sipped your passion fruit
as i choked down my green
trying to keep from
spitting it out
as i made you laugh.


Posted on 08/09/2005
Copyright © 2020 Uriel Tovar

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Sarah Graves on 08/09/05 at 07:55 AM

You capture this moment very well, there's a bittersweet affection to it. great read :)

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/09/05 at 08:20 AM

She musta been somethin' special...I didn't have that much fun in the Schoolhouse Cafe this morning. Which cafes are you going to? Glad you had fun. ;-)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/09/05 at 04:45 PM

LOL! Sounds like when one spits milk out his nose while drinking and laughing at the same time. Fun read. :o)

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 08/09/05 at 07:16 PM

Sounds like a fun time!!!

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