| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 08/03/05 at 01:53 AM lovely play on words in the form. Congrats, David. |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 08/03/05 at 02:19 AM This was great. Those little monsters get everywhere :) they even got inside my house one time, beautiful but I do have a war against them. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/04/05 at 04:24 AM I like the word play in this one Dave...Charlie |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 08/05/05 at 04:00 PM Yeah, I liked this one a lot, too - a gentle, comforting and inspiring image.... d:-) |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/05/05 at 05:31 PM Truly beautiful! :) |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 08/05/05 at 09:16 PM I agree with Arthur's use of the word "soothing". Indeed I felt the softness and the light, the hint of color and beauty and the touch of life and growth. I also felt as though the season was speaking without speaking, the language is universal. What a lovely piece David. Well done :-)
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| Posted by Kate Demeree on 08/07/05 at 01:05 PM This is beautiful David... it makes me feel as if I had a living bouqet right there on the page |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/07/05 at 11:01 PM You've approached the profound in such simple terms! Dynamic! |
