Spirit Ride by Kate DemereeWind kissed Sun warmed Your skin invitedÂ… Touch
Tentative fingers Achingly alive Trace electric outlines Across your silken fields
Tingling pulses From tip to palm Heat my body Emotions storm
Enveloping, consuming As trustingly I embrace Your form
08/01/2005 Posted on 08/01/2005 Copyright © 2024 Kate Demeree
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 08/02/05 at 03:46 PM 'Enveloping, consuming
As trustingly
I embrace'...this beautiful depiction of the spirit ride. These lines speak so well for my own intake of this beautiful piece. |
Posted by Graeme Fielden on 08/07/05 at 03:12 PM Beautiful in sentiment and in form, Kate. It's nice to see you post again...:) |
Posted by Ken Harnisch on 08/08/05 at 08:35 PM i love the intensity and the brevity of the form..the beauty of the words has always been a hallmark of your poetry! |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/12/05 at 03:12 PM another one for the ages. Kate you have a way with words and are the most gentle and tender concerning their welfare and were I a word, know that I would be treated accordingly. for your soul and demeanor is innately sweet. |
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