Whisper Silence

by Rula Shin

You are poetry on my tongue
Silent as the amber-draped dawn
Dancing on my hushed lips, bare

I mouth your presence softly
Merged with sounds of silence
Whispering through me


Posted on 07/25/2005
Copyright © 2024 Rula Shin

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/26/05 at 03:55 PM

Sometimes there are so few words available to describe such experiences, but you've managed to capture this moment, and relay it in such beauty. I'm awed.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 07/26/05 at 04:50 PM

Well, I don't see any eroticism nor any sensuality. But I do see love in its deepest form produced here in PURELY metaphysical terms.LOVE SPEAKING IN SILENCE IN THESE LOVE FILLED LONELY MOMENTS ON METAPHYSICAL PLANE.This embodiment of poetry is unique. This is pure beauty and so subtle.So much that I see readers seeing it exclusively on physical plane.

Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 07/26/05 at 06:48 PM

This one gave me chills - good chills. Beautifully crafted, Rula.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 07/27/05 at 01:16 AM

i never know what to say about your poems, you're just amazing! this one ripped through my mind and sent wonderful chills through my body.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/11/05 at 02:32 AM

Fabulously beautiful, pleasantly haunting Rula. One of your best IMO. Adds to favorites.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/25/05 at 11:32 AM

Lovely! Striking images. Especially liked, "Silent as amber-draped dawn".

Posted by Lucia Haselhorst on 12/17/11 at 05:39 AM

A beautiful poem...that's what it is.

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