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Nympho on speed

by Ava Blu

30 second dates with 5 minute good byes
(she does it all on the first)

crotch less panties & skirts above her thighs
(can’t waste time)

no dinner necessary;
the buffet is her
“all you can eat”
until you’re able to swallow her whole

your gums are numb;
filled with disease
because you just couldn’t stay
off your knees

she’s got kaleidoscope eyes
ready to devour every excess

never enough appetite
to be fed.

07/14/2005

Author's Note: ugh

Posted on 07/14/2005
Copyright © 2025 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Anita Mac on 07/14/05 at 09:45 PM

I think this poem's being pulled in two different directions as far as language goes... crude, or cleverly crude... I like the latter better, but either could work.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 07/19/05 at 04:18 AM

to me this scene looks sad.Devoid of any beauty. But this is.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/22/07 at 06:51 PM

As a former speed addict, I can easily relate to the insanity of this piece. The totally crazy thing is that I'd be tempted to do it again if I was to come across some. And yes, sex was the main motivator. As the saying goes, "better to let a sleeping dog lie."

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