Although to me, that last line sounds a bit clichéd, corny (was it really foggy?), perhaps instead, just another day for Londoners, bringing in the factor that they're used to bombings from WWII and the IRA, the rest aptly captures the irony of going off to work, school, etc. and taking for granted they'd return home safely. Thanks for writing this for all of us.

I did not see the previous version. For me the second stanza is the best - most powerful - though I would want to get rid of the cliche of pierced breasts - maybe something like "grief marches on, carries on" to echo the beginning... And I'd get rid of the tentative note of the word 'perhaps'. But despite my desire to edit the poem to bits, I really do like the last 3 lines and the rest has real promise of something really, really GOOD.

Mmm. This is much better - I like how you took made my suggestions and made them your own :)