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I See You (Part III)
by Uriel Tovarthe day that i lived
the sun was blue
and swallowed up the sea.
it belched the stars
out
like hot phlegm
coughed by an old man with bronchitis.
i sang that day
a song by elliott, "I Didn't
Understand."
i didn't either but
i knew i wouldn't.
the day that i decided to live,
the world crumbled
i stood on what remained.
07/06/2005 Posted on 07/06/2005
Copyright © 2024 Uriel Tovar
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 07/09/05 at 12:52 PM A trilogy which remains very haunting indeed, Uriel. However, I like how you tied everything up nicely in this piece. I loved much of your phrasing and the sad pictures which my mind drew were complimentary of your words. I have never written a continutation piece before, but you have spurred my thoughts in such a direction. |
| Posted by Jason Moskalyk on 03/16/09 at 09:42 AM it's unreal, and you say it well |
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