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I cuss like a little gay sailor

by Bradd Howard

docking into your port
I have a boy at every stop, you know

I cuss like a little gay sailor
dripping words from my tongue that would make Shirley Temple blush
for I do my lollipop dance to a completely different tune

and smile like I mean it when I say
"come here"

06/09/2005

Author's Note: there you go shawnelle... I have done it at last

Posted on 06/09/2005
Copyright © 2020 Bradd Howard

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kimberly Bare on 06/09/05 at 03:31 PM

:) great lil' poem! I adore the "lollipop" part...

Posted by Maryellen Lebeda-Parra on 06/09/05 at 05:29 PM

HAHAHAHAH ... you DID do it!

Posted by Paul Marino on 06/09/05 at 06:53 PM

ok, braddly, i'm cranky, and i kno you sort of wrote this bc it was inspired during one of our conversations, but my displeasure in this poem comes in the rhythm. you kno i love you though, right? anyway, i'm not sure if it's my crankiness or if it's the flow, but i don't like how the first stanza ends. let me just say, i've read it like 10 times, so almost like the poem at this point. ha, i didn't the first time i read it. i don't like the word dripping here either. there's not enough to this, for me.

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 06/09/05 at 08:37 PM

"I cuss like a little gay sailor dripping words from my tongue that would make Shirley Temple blush for I do my lollipop dance to a completely different tune" ... this whole stanza did it for me, Bradd. I think you must "cuss like a sailor" quite eloquently.

Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 06/10/05 at 11:33 PM

haha... this one made me smile like a gay sailor. nice work.

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 08/02/05 at 09:23 PM

hahahahahaha!

Posted by Anne Boulender on 09/10/06 at 08:24 AM

im a little late to the party but thats pretty cute

Posted by Elizabeth Seago on 12/27/06 at 02:37 PM

Fhaaabulous! Loved this. =]

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