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This Is.... by Bek WilliamsTaking the leap
Blind jump
Trusting you
With every moment
I want
My dream to come true
And all this uncertainty
That surrounds me
I'm wishing it away
All this insanity
That surrounds me
Can go away
Cos I'm...
Taking the leap
Blind faith
Trusting you
Every passing moment
Makes me want
My dream to come true
"You're my dream, please come true" 06/04/2005
Author's Note: For a certain young man in my life(not going into details), but I am entrusting my love to him...
Posted on 06/08/2005 Copyright © 2026 Bek Williams
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 06/09/05 at 05:04 PM "All this insanity That surrounds me Can go away
Cos I'm...Taking the leap Blind faith" - yes, at some point we must all make that leap of blind faith or else die whith each of those 'passing moments' you speak of. Instead one should make passing moments 'present moments'. This is very positive and bold, for without calculated risks there is only stagnance and dreams of "what if" . Nice piece :-) |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 06/09/05 at 05:16 PM yes, one needs to jump but that jump can be a conscious jump rather than blind. Risk is necessary but we should be conscious of it balancing the risk and the purpose, trying to find the equilibirium. In any case, this does reflect the deep rooted love. |
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