| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 06/01/05 at 07:58 PM haha, i like that too boy. |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 06/02/05 at 02:58 PM Those last 2 lines are killer. Love it. |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 06/03/05 at 03:08 PM Well this was like nothing I expected at all! hahaha I did find myself laughing as soon as I finished it. Though now I'm rereading, and well I'm feeling a shift in mood in relation to its meaning, "I'm an ox you're a moron I'm too stubborn...you're too stupid" - beneath the joke that is so well told is a sad statement isn't it? The ox and the moron, well neither of them know any better do they? Very nicely done Bradd, I am amazed how this piece could bring forth in me such two opposing poles of emotion. I would call this a good dose of dark comedy, well written, well stated. Sad. |
| Posted by Melanie J Yarbrough on 06/22/05 at 06:04 PM at first I wondered where you were going- but the last lines tell me straight up. nice |
| Posted by Andrew S Adams on 05/31/07 at 07:31 AM read a couple of your poems now. you're almost too clever for your own good- almost. you pull it off exactly how you need to. this is that perfect punch of poetry; you have a startling economic ability with your words. i enjoyed this a lot... going to read more. |
| Posted by V. Blake on 08/17/09 at 05:06 AM Easy to see why this was poem of the day. Brilliant work. |
| Posted by Traci Mabats on 08/18/09 at 12:50 AM Ha! Genius :) |
| Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 09/28/10 at 09:48 PM love this so much. |
