| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/27/05 at 12:33 PM Michele, I do not fear that the sun will burn itself out, for we have your passion and it burns eternal in our hearts. |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 05/27/05 at 02:41 PM Congratulations Michele. And to your husband too...this is a cool tribute: and bonding...a spell? ;) |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 05/27/05 at 05:59 PM A wonderful day remembered fondly in verse. Exquisite imagery and wonderful sentiment. Thanks for sharing. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/27/05 at 09:24 PM Congratulations Mich. One of lifes best investments is in a bond, sounds like you have
a good one...Charlie |
| Posted by Susan Q Tomas on 05/28/05 at 03:52 AM There is intense love expressed in this poem. It adds up to more than all its parts. Happy Anniversary to you! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 05/29/05 at 06:22 PM I love your words and what they weave. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 06/07/05 at 02:12 AM You put Hallmark to shame with this fine effort, Michelle. Pure gold!
pe4ce... |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 06/16/05 at 02:56 PM 'my spirit bonded to your core
hand in hand we walk the line
through every ephemeral door'....these lines reflects the greater understanding love forms part of.This is a long process and you seem to have gone through.Its here where lovers are no lovers, they are part of love which in turn is part of a greater understanding.
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| Posted by H.M Stevens on 07/13/05 at 05:51 AM Those opening lines are what really got me...so romantically haunting...truly invigorating and uplifting... hope all is well with you. |
