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haiku is for lovers.

by Melanie J Yarbrough

he's saved your number
as Home in his phone because
you're where his heart is.

05/22/2005

Posted on 05/22/2005
Copyright © 2024 Melanie J Yarbrough

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Andrew S Adams on 05/25/05 at 02:24 AM

i love it when haikus come across this naturally. simply wonderful, my friend.

Posted by Ava Blu on 09/23/05 at 04:01 AM

i never told you how much i love this one. i find your title in my head often. it made me want to attempt haiku, which i have, though none of them compare to this.

Posted by P.T. Brooks on 12/17/06 at 05:29 AM

nice haiku, its often hard to make a powerful statement with this particular style of writing but you pulled it off -pt

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