*voyeur* by Kimberly Baresatiny skin
uncovered slowly
as you slide out of silk
bubbles dance
around your body
as you lower into the bath
candlelight creates
a cascade of shadow
as you let down those curls
soothed and satisfied
you slip into sleep
as i rinse the bubbles
from the tub with the
start of my cold shower 05/21/2005 Author's Note: inspired by Cooper West's word "voyeur"...Thank You!
Posted on 05/21/2005 Copyright © 2025 Kimberly Bare
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 05/21/05 at 10:51 PM i love the imagery in this. great poem! |
Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 05/22/05 at 07:39 PM i think i need to take a cold shower now...strong imagery! ~JPP |
Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 05/22/05 at 08:47 PM Imberly, I have to agree, your imagery was fantastic. What a beautifully written poem. |
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