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*voyeur*

by Kimberly Bare

satiny skin
uncovered slowly
as you slide out of silk

bubbles dance
around your body
as you lower into the bath

candlelight creates
a cascade of shadow
as you let down those curls

soothed and satisfied
you slip into sleep

as i rinse the bubbles
from the tub with the
start of my cold shower

05/21/2005

Author's Note: inspired by Cooper West's word "voyeur"...Thank You!

Posted on 05/21/2005
Copyright © 2024 Kimberly Bare

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 05/21/05 at 10:51 PM

i love the imagery in this. great poem!

Posted by Jeffrey Parren on 05/22/05 at 07:39 PM

i think i need to take a cold shower now...strong imagery! ~JPP

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 05/22/05 at 08:47 PM

Imberly, I have to agree, your imagery was fantastic. What a beautifully written poem.

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