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summer fling
by Carolyn Coville"i'm falling for that giggle..."
an intoxicated thought that slipped past your lips in between kisses.
in the darkness, i smirked,
those words echoing through my mind.
such a sweet thought.
but i'm not into fantasies,
and the reality is i'll be gone tomorrow. 06/27/2004 Posted on 05/19/2005
Copyright © 2025 Carolyn Coville
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 05/19/05 at 11:40 PM this is awesome! i think it deserves 4 stars, it is simple and effective and the last line is great...this is my new anthem ! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/23/05 at 03:01 PM Short, sweet, but also sad. Nicely put! |
| Posted by Vimal Rony on 01/20/06 at 08:56 PM Simple yet so deep.This poem reveals that you have matured deep within. |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 02/09/25 at 11:18 PM So very true. I wish I had been able to see the reality as well as you did. |
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