i really enjoyed this, the form emphasizes the words that need to be, while still concentrating at the task at hand...like the inner conversation of a mind enticed by a beautiful inner being and then realizing there is more too! like an added bonus. life should be filled with tons of added bonuses. ~JPP

Nikki, your circular poem takes notice of someone in the space of one breath. From the mind to the face and body, then back to the soul; from critical judgement to acceptance, you reveal yourself to the other person just as your inner thoughts reveal him to you. One suggestion, most of the poem is like you're speaking to him. The little interjections are in your mind, so you can put them in italics. The html for that is insightful, which is what your poem is.
~Chelle~

Actually, the html disappeared when I posted the comment, so again - (less than sign, "i", more than sign. Then at the end, same signs with a forward slash in front of the "i"

yes, ultimately that is true. anything worth the while is all waiting inside.