Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Nikki Benson on 05/13/05 at 12:55 AM ahhhh... That's nice and relaxing |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 05/14/05 at 12:24 AM very pleasant and evocative. |
Posted by Kate Demeree on 05/14/05 at 05:22 AM Indeed there is none.... I too love the sound of wind chimes. Liked this one alot Chris |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/17/05 at 03:18 AM Ditto Chris...Charlie |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/17/05 at 02:06 PM such a peaceful picture. Lovely read! |
Posted by Ginette T Belle on 05/17/05 at 02:38 PM wow chris, this really touched me...i'll use the oh so cliche "this is beautiful" but what else can i say? lovely flow.. |
Posted by Graeme Fielden on 05/18/05 at 02:12 PM Very warm, atmospheric writing, Mr Sorrenti...Bravo! Congrats on no 1! My vote for POTD! |
Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 05/18/05 at 04:40 PM that is my favourite time lately... when the sun is setting, and you put your troubles away... beautiful imagery... blessings... |
Posted by Christina Bruno on 05/19/05 at 11:32 PM this is beautiful and it deserves to be #1 :) |
Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 05/20/05 at 10:47 AM a perfect capture of the moment... or of may... or of today, minus the work part... put excellently chris! |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 05/21/05 at 01:21 AM Though brief this poem is full of warmtn and good cheer. I could feel the relaxed atmoshere, the pleasantness of unwinding and enjoying an evening at home. |
Posted by Carolyn Coville on 05/22/05 at 06:35 PM ooo how lovely and peaceful..this poem has soothed my always anxious mind! |
Posted by Don Matley on 09/06/07 at 04:16 PM Your poem is gret but I had to laugh,becaus my neighbour has a chime on his porch which is all but gone but one bell. IT rings by my bedroom window and keeps me up annoyingly. Next time I hear it I will recite your poem aloud and drown out the sound!
I of course agree with Reen's comments. |