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Tribute-ary
by Leslie Ann EisenbergJazzy gab, side-a mirth, backdrop
Essence of bluegrass and home fries.
Steelheart arms traverse the birdwire,
Southern fingers rim the river,
Effluent petals spread the sky
04/18/2005 Author's Note: "Itīs mountain high - river deep - the right stuff"
Posted on 04/19/2005
Copyright © 2024 Leslie Ann Eisenberg
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/20/05 at 05:31 PM The depiction is nice though its difficult for me place my fingers. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/23/05 at 06:39 PM Leslie, I enjoyed reading this down-home verse. I, too, do know know who it's a tribute too, but the assonance and consonance move the lines, making me feel as if there should be a banjo accompanying the reading and reminding me of Kentucky. Good work!
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/24/05 at 02:43 AM Some seriously seductive mojo going on here Leslie. Wonderful read! Glad I had an opportunity to do so. |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 03/14/07 at 08:49 AM this one sounds like a winner! from where I'm standing.. thank you for stopping by and for your kind sentiment.. aloha to you and yours from this side of paradise....;-) |
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