Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/15/05 at 01:48 PM Aptly described...and not forced or non-sensicle as some acrostics can be. I like this a lot...wish I had written it...glad you did! |
Posted by Beth K Hannah on 04/15/05 at 05:42 PM this is nice...i wish my writing process was like this. |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/16/05 at 01:16 AM Certainly succinct and clear definition of poetry. |
Posted by Laura Doom on 04/17/05 at 06:42 PM The metaphor works well - it has a certain fragrance. Is there a tranluscent reference here to the 'he/she loves me/not' practice? (A literary, rather than a personal evocation for me :) |
Posted by Carolyn Coville on 04/20/05 at 04:19 AM ooo nicely written! it flows so nicely i didnt even notice it was an acrostic...and what a great description! i also like how you used 'tantalizing' |