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by Maureen Glaude

Peeling the petals off
Opening minds
Evoking eternal emotions
Tantalizing the senses
Romancing and ruminating
Your moments in life

04/15/2005

Author's Note: acrostic

Posted on 04/15/2005
Copyright © 2024 Maureen Glaude

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/15/05 at 01:48 PM

Aptly described...and not forced or non-sensicle as some acrostics can be. I like this a lot...wish I had written it...glad you did!

Posted by Beth K Hannah on 04/15/05 at 05:42 PM

this is nice...i wish my writing process was like this.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/16/05 at 01:16 AM

Certainly succinct and clear definition of poetry.

Posted by Laura Doom on 04/17/05 at 06:42 PM

The metaphor works well - it has a certain fragrance. Is there a tranluscent reference here to the 'he/she loves me/not' practice? (A literary, rather than a personal evocation for me :)

Posted by Carolyn Coville on 04/20/05 at 04:19 AM

ooo nicely written! it flows so nicely i didnt even notice it was an acrostic...and what a great description! i also like how you used 'tantalizing'

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