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dancing on my screen

by Shonda Creemer

I don't know what to write
inside of this little white box

I know she needs to be filled
and my thoughts purged of themselves

but this flashing cursor is simply my
reminder of how empty things yearn for life

an ebb and flow of monochromic spaces
forming nothing into something deserving

pure ~ simple ~ complete
that is poetry in motion

04/11/2005

Posted on 04/12/2005
Copyright © 2024 Shonda Creemer

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/12/05 at 03:44 AM

I really enjoyed the different perspective of "poetry in motion" expressed here. Nicely done Shonda.

Posted by Paul Marino on 04/13/05 at 05:59 PM

that was cool bc it was happening at the same pace the reader was reading, if that makes any sense. i guess you would call that, "poetry in motion".

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