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by Ulyss RubeyYou try to pen it.
The mind only worms around feelings.
The poet goes mad
in a maze of embedded expressions.
Mediocrity envades through the
gates of education in Trojan memories,
and art looses another battle
with the force of experience. 04/11/2005 Posted on 04/11/2005
Copyright © 2024 Ulyss Rubey
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| Posted by JD Clay on 04/11/05 at 08:50 PM The title lured me in and the poem delivered in exemplary fashion, Uly. This may be your most though provoking piece yet. But I can't help wondering if the second line is looking for one more word or one word less.
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/03/05 at 03:55 PM Yes, a very strong, thought provoking expression on the pitfall of being a writer/artist. |
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