A Loose Offer { Lucifer } by Fredrich MohreGot my pole and went a-fishin the other day,
In an old tobacco pond about a mile away.
Just to drown a few worms and enjoy the sun
And avoid the rat race they make us run.
When up pops this character from outa the blue,
Said, Freddie boy, I got a deal for you.
Lou S. Saffeir, he said was his name.
And buyin up souls is my claim to fame.
Then he shook my hand, his was sweaty and hot,
And he smiled like a salesman on a used car lot.
At first I thought this yahoo was just a joke,
But I noticed that his cologne smelled a lot like smoke.
Im here to make a deal, for you a pure delight.
So you can come on down, cause the price is right.
Fred, you dont look too stupid, so Im sure youre aware,
That Im in competition with that man up there.
I know eternal life is what hes always flaunted.
But I can give you everything you ever wanted.
Riches, women, power
dont that have a good ring?
In exchange for your soul; why its really no big thing.
And when you come down later, you will see
That youll be in the presence of good company.
This Ill tell you now, for whatever its worth
Ive got every lawyer thats ever walked the earth.
And to assure that youll socialize with the best,
Ive got every agent in the IRS.
Plus them self righteous preachers that you see on TV,
Sayin Ill pray for you, but send your money to me.
While they carry on like they dont feel no shame;
All drippin with riches and lustin for fame.
With their mansions and their lands in vast amounts,
And a-rolling in their million dollar bank accounts.
Like Jimmy and Oral and that PTL guy Jim.
Plus that crazy made-up wife who spent the money with him.
And when their time comes, Im willing to bet
I know where theyre goinits just that they dont know yet.
Theres politicians galore. In their finest hour
Theyve sold their souls for recognition and power.
And the crème de la crème, (thats why Im so chipper)
Ive even got Slick Willie, (you know hes had that problem with his zipper)
Theyll all be down there, and I just named a few.
cause you know Old Nick has took an interest in you.
Then he waved his arms, For you, a special treat
And a chest of gold appeared right at my feet.
I appreciate the offer, but dont you see,
When the tax man digs in, hell leave nothin for me
He looked at me strangely, said this wont due.
Freddie boy, I got just the thing for you.
He handed me a catalog, with his dark red hand.
There was a woman in that book from almost every land.
He said, Take your pick Freddie, you can even take two.
Whatever it takes to close this deal with you.
Now a girl on each arm, thats a pleasant thought.
But I knew what kind of trouble that wouldve wrought.
Well thank you Mr. Satan, but I must refuse.
For theres no one in there that I want to chose.
So take your old catalog, all steamy and hot.
I got something better; this dont impress me a lot.
Now shes an older model, thats for sure.
Plus theres days that her temper is pretty hard to endure."
"But shes always stuck beside me, no matter how bad
The situation got, or the problems we had.
She taught me a lot of stuff, I never knew before.
And she never thought of quittin it hittin the door.
So please Mr. Devil, dont get mad,
Its just you aint got nothin to entice this lad."
Well; he clinched his fists, and mumbled to his self,
Then said, I still got one more thing on the shelf.
He waved his hand, and the lightning tore
While he uttered incantations from Egyptian lore.
With a dose of flame and some smoke, my friends;
There sat a brand new Mercedes Benz.
My mouth dropped open, boy, I was mute,
For I saw it was a convertible to boot.
With a four-on-the-floor, oh, it looked so fine,
I knew I was gonna sign on that dotted line.
One more thing, I said, to complete this deal,
I dont like the color of this automobile.
Old Devil, he just smiled, he knew he just got through.
Red, Silver, Black, what ever color for you
I said, The color Fuchsia is a favorite of mine.
With gold plated trimming, and that would do just fine
He ripped off his horns and threw them on the ground
Then he rambled to himself, as he spun himself around.
Then his eyes turned red, he started pullin out his hair.
He was throwing such a tantrum; it was really hard to bear.
Screaming right out loud, he made a horrid sound.
His feet, they were a kickin and his fists begun to pound.
When he finally got up, he said, SWEET JESUS, give me a break.
Ive had my fill of your ignorance; its more than I can take
A FUCHSIA Mercedes, I should give to you?
There are some stupid things even the devil wont do.
What an UGLY color for a Mercedes Benz.
Thats one means that doesnt justify the ends.
To think Id had your soul to broil and singe.
But I begin to think that youre some lunatic fringe
You dumb idiot, this conversations through.
And I hope I never meet another dumb plow boy like you.
Youve tried my patience to the ninth-degree.
You slow minded redneck, get away from me.
You go on to heaven, for all I care.
No one wants your stupid country ass down there.
With a wave of his arms, more smoke and flame,
And Old Nick disappeared, just the was he came.
When the smoke had cleared, I had kept my soul.
There was just me, and it, and my fishing pole.
Well, Ill sure miss that Mercedes, but its just as well,
Cause I would a drove that Benz straight down to hell.
The hereafter dont scare me, quite like it used to.
Cause I think my future is lined with heavenly blue.
I know I aint much to brag about, but this I can say,
Im so aggravating; I REALLY pissed off the Devil one day.
04/11/2003 Posted on 04/11/2005 Copyright © 2024 Fredrich Mohre
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/11/05 at 09:10 PM HAHAHAH, this is the most pleasant read ever!! oh gosh, what a story! Excellent work!! |
Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 04/12/05 at 11:10 AM A familiar tale with a personal twist..funny to the end. Nice job. - RCat |
Posted by James Zealy on 04/13/05 at 02:09 PM Reminds me of Charlie Daniels. He had that same kind of down home message and humor. |
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 04/13/05 at 04:23 PM You do tell a great story! Very funny all the way through! |
Posted by Genevieve Sturrock on 02/23/07 at 05:47 PM now will someone please explain to this simple-minded girl just what is wrong with a pink mercedes?....pink cadillacs are okay, but a pink mercedes isn't? go figure! lovely little story here and it's left me chuckling and shaking my head. |
Posted by Paganini Jones on 11/11/07 at 11:49 PM A great little tale - had me chuckling too. But just what would be wrong fith fuscia and gold trim? It'd do fine for me too! (Watch the typos though) |
Posted by Mo Couts on 06/29/11 at 02:54 AM Wow! Immensely clever and well delivered; wonderful job! |
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