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topic: cigarette timeline
by Morgan D Hafelethe air is heavy tonight
and the smoke sinks to the ground
covering the earth with fog
smog washes away the rain
double nostril: exhale
one more down
but you can't smoke right
without a beer 04/09/2005 Author's Note: topic by denton harris. i always said i wouldn't do a topic poem, but here i am... oh well. welcome to reality morgan, at least i know i'm an idiot... if you're reading this, you're probably wasting your time, i'm sorry.
Posted on 04/09/2005
Copyright © 2024 Morgan D Hafele
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 04/11/05 at 12:50 AM Morgan, well you've now done a topic poem and it's pretty darn good. Maybe suggested topics aren't all that bad ... especially when we're in slow writing mode and can't seem to get inspired. |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 07/01/05 at 03:33 PM A quit smoking about a year ago. This makes me realize how much I really miss it. Effective read that awakens old memories and cravings. |
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