| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quinlan L Gibson on 04/08/05 at 10:06 PM this is staring death in the face. I like it very much. |
| Posted by Delilah Coyne on 04/09/05 at 12:39 AM The imagery here definitely sticks in your brain. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 04/09/05 at 05:53 AM nice one, Bright! |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/14/05 at 12:43 AM this is a wonderful piece! excellent...like the form and flow |
| Posted by Kalikala Smith on 04/14/05 at 11:35 AM to be brutally honest i feel like its missing something. the last stanza seems to tie into the rest by the continuation of the ocean theme. there is the whole death thing obviously... but there just seems like a skip of thought there. otherwise, i love the imagery and the mood you set. :) |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/15/05 at 05:11 PM Yes, but what matters is what is." tomorrow is too far away'.The process of life is also the process of death and the other way round. It all depends on us as to how we treat it. Do we really live our lives of let this process of death take its own course. |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 04/28/05 at 08:10 PM Uriel, this is raw, honest and powerful. The last line was kick ass great. You had me hook, line and sinker from beginning to end. |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 04/29/05 at 08:52 AM one of my worst fears drowning....I am not so scared of it now...very well written |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 06/03/07 at 12:29 AM Just brilliant. That's all I have to say. Except congrats on POTD! d:-) |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 06/03/07 at 03:18 AM VERY WELL DESERVED CONGRATS ON POTD~ |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 06/04/07 at 04:08 AM I had a power outage when I came into congratulate you on your POTD, Uriel. So, here it comes now ... congratulations on your POTD! :) |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 09/03/08 at 07:55 PM this is startling, and i like it a lot. belated congrats on POTD - it was well-deserved. |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 09/20/11 at 05:34 PM Still awesome, by the way. |
