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Dawn

by Kate Demeree

Once again wings flutter

Dew fresh

Silken soft

Fragile webbings

Not yet strong

 

Dim rays on the horizon

Bring healing

Slicing darkness

To emerge

Whole

 

Softly part the lips

Timid, trembling

Gentle curve

Hopeful blues

Peering, seeking

Renewal

Light

Life

 

Hold me father

In the palm of your hand

Till I find the strength

To fly┬ů

04/03/2005

Posted on 04/04/2005
Copyright © 2021 Kate Demeree

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Graeme Fielden on 04/04/05 at 01:18 PM

There's such a subtle innocence in this posting...A beautiful sentiment; reflected in your words... ;)

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/05/05 at 04:10 AM

'Once again wings flutter Dew fresh'''this is so full of life. Renewed hopes.'Renewal(of) Light Life'...as you say...'to fly'. You have the strength Kate and you know this. This is vibrating with beauty.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/06/05 at 03:03 AM

Another dawn to bring life anew. Wonderful Kate. May your flight always be a happy flight...Charlie

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/06/05 at 01:45 PM

you understand love better than anyone I know. and love is what you are. pure and simple.

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 04/10/05 at 07:08 AM

the last verse is a beautiful prayer entire unto itself..a gem, Kate!

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