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Hope Springs Eternal

by Heide McAlister-Bates

Damp, grey days persist
though it's meant to be
spring.

The weak light casts
a pallor over the
city,
masking the promise of
new beginnings in a dingy
cloak of dullness.

You and me, we're like
daffodils in the dark -
Glorious and golden
in the light of day,
pale,spectral,wanting
in the gloaming.

Oh, but when the sun shines.

When the sun shines...

03/28/2005

Author's Note: Ah, Spring - when the weather gets warmer and poets go mad...

Posted on 03/28/2005
Copyright © 2024 Heide McAlister-Bates

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/29/05 at 02:05 PM

Nice capture; sure can relate to this one!

Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 04/02/05 at 11:39 AM

awesomely put together. it i thoroughly enjoyed it.

Posted by Bradd Howard on 05/02/05 at 09:49 PM

how glorious this is... gave me a warm feeling... like sunlight on my back. Thank you for your words... Bradd

Posted by Meghan Helmich on 07/23/08 at 03:44 PM

daffodils in the dark. that's fantastic, heide. this is a great great poem. and i agree...gray days always seem to drag on an on. in every season (at least in tampa.)

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