Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/26/05 at 03:17 AM I am not up tight
About your moments of light
onto my night,
I think it's right
I never fight
When there's no blight.
Fun poem Glenn..Charlie |
Posted by JD Clay on 03/26/05 at 10:31 PM Reading between the lines I see a metamorphosis, like a flower leaning into the warming sun, feeding on the source without the thought of why. How luminescent!
pe4ce... |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/28/05 at 03:14 AM Much said so briefly in this succinct symbolic poem. |
Posted by Laura Doom on 04/16/05 at 07:19 PM Having read your bio, I'd say you were 'writing stars', perhaps with divine inspiration - 'turning rote into write' is a gravid line
Satisfying read |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 09/24/06 at 05:45 AM This is truly a statement of peaceful letting go and allowing something greater take control. Good lesson for those stuck in a rut. ;-)
~Chelle~ |
Posted by Jean Mollett on 10/10/09 at 03:58 AM Hi Glenn,
I agree with Michelle. Yes it's a good reminder.
Good works. |