the present of me

by Glenn Currier

turn rote into write
don't do
just be
in the present of me
onto your night
i jot moments of light


Posted on 03/25/2005
Copyright © 2022 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/26/05 at 03:17 AM

I am not up tight About your moments of light onto my night, I think it's right I never fight When there's no blight. Fun poem Glenn..Charlie

Posted by JD Clay on 03/26/05 at 10:31 PM

Reading between the lines I see a metamorphosis, like a flower leaning into the warming sun, feeding on the source without the thought of why. How luminescent! pe4ce...

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/28/05 at 03:14 AM

Much said so briefly in this succinct symbolic poem.

Posted by Laura Doom on 04/16/05 at 07:19 PM

Having read your bio, I'd say you were 'writing stars', perhaps with divine inspiration - 'turning rote into write' is a gravid line
Satisfying read

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 09/24/06 at 05:45 AM

This is truly a statement of peaceful letting go and allowing something greater take control. Good lesson for those stuck in a rut. ;-)

Posted by Jean Mollett on 10/10/09 at 03:58 AM

Hi Glenn, I agree with Michelle. Yes it's a good reminder. Good works.

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