|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/26/05 at 03:17 AM|
I am not up tight
About your moments of light
onto my night,
I think it's right
I never fight
When there's no blight.
Fun poem Glenn..Charlie
|Posted by JD Clay on 03/26/05 at 10:31 PM|
Reading between the lines I see a metamorphosis, like a flower leaning into the warming sun, feeding on the source without the thought of why. How luminescent!
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/28/05 at 03:14 AM|
Much said so briefly in this succinct symbolic poem.
|Posted by Laura Doom on 04/16/05 at 07:19 PM|
Having read your bio, I'd say you were 'writing stars', perhaps with divine inspiration - 'turning rote into write' is a gravid line
|Posted by Michelle Angelini on 09/24/06 at 05:45 AM|
This is truly a statement of peaceful letting go and allowing something greater take control. Good lesson for those stuck in a rut. ;-)
|Posted by Jean Mollett on 10/10/09 at 03:58 AM|
I agree with Michelle. Yes it's a good reminder.