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Just For Now

by Maureen Glaude

our gentle giant
brother
sedated on life support

03/11/2005

Posted on 03/11/2005
Copyright © 2021 Maureen Glaude

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 03/13/05 at 01:27 PM

I don't think so few words ever wrenched a heart so much...

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 03/14/05 at 02:40 AM

Mo, this sure gets to an emotional core, with a blind-side punch. My thoughts are with you.
~Chelle~

Posted by Kate Demeree on 03/15/05 at 04:33 PM

Sadly poingent Mo... *hugs*

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/16/05 at 06:45 PM

The juxtaposition of gentle giant and sedated/life support is what really give these three short lines they're knockout blow. Well done, and congrats on making the top 10.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/20/05 at 04:24 AM

A sad three lines Mo...Charlie

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