*Topic ~rolling down green hills *

by Kimberly Bare

sea of green
dips before me
and i yearn to
let loose all
inhibitions instilled
by business suits
and briefcase

giggles overtake
the carefully honed
elequence of enunciation
as i gleefully give in and
revel in the knowledge
that aging bodies
still harbor


Author's Note: Wonderful topic given by Michelle Angelini

Posted on 03/11/2005
Copyright © 2022 Kimberly Bare

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 03/11/05 at 04:52 AM

Kimberly - I LOVE THIS!!! It's exactly what I intended when I posted this topic. I immediately put it on my favorites list. I love the green text. You ROCK!

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 03/11/05 at 03:58 PM

great flow...i love this..

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 03/12/05 at 04:06 AM

Ahhh, Kimberly ... so well put and wishing I could sometimes wear this as a poster on my back! :) ~~ Kyle Anne

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 03/13/05 at 06:36 AM

Oh now we are all going to have to roll down a hill...really wonderful images here....

Posted by Carolyn Coville on 08/12/12 at 08:09 PM

Love the sweet innocence of this piece. Am wondering if it's almost an innate desire in all of us to roll down a beautiful, green hill when we see one...

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