Have you found Jesus? by Mary Ellen Smith
Their grandmother bought them a plastic nativity scene.
It was there under the tree when their chubby lil legs
ran them in after the long ride.
They played with it for months after that
moving the figures about
playing the games that children play.
And then one day in March
They couldn't find all the pieces and
their two voices could be heard through out the house...
Jesus!
Jesus!
Room to room
Jesus!
Jesus!
The younger one called out...
Hey Brendan! Have you found Jesus yet?
03/10/2005 Author's Note: A true story about my sister's grandchildren.
Posted on 03/10/2005 Copyright © 2024 Mary Ellen Smith
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/10/05 at 03:38 PM ...ahh, wonderful lil' story about your grandkids annnnnd yet a lot of mankind,too, as you well know, are looking for Jesus, he's ephemeral to the eyes but very real and i love your poem for what it is and what we (big-brainers) can do with it...find Jesus! love it...peace, chaz |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 03/10/05 at 08:42 PM Wonderful Mary Ellen. I enjoyed this story, that definitely has deeper meanings. True happiness and joy begin and end with Jesus.
~Chelle~ |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/12/05 at 12:06 AM Funtastic Mar. This brought a smile to my face.Charlie |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 03/12/05 at 01:54 AM While a whimsical, humorous anecdote, it has a serious message for the reader. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/12/05 at 08:06 PM I agree with Quentin's comment; a well expressed anecdote with a strong message that can be taken as both comical and serious. One of your best IMO Mary Ellen. Adds to favorites. |
Posted by Shonda Creemer on 03/24/05 at 07:29 PM So very precious Mary Ellen ~ I can't believe I missed this one! :) |
Posted by Jean Mollett on 01/16/07 at 05:17 AM Hi Mary Ellen,
This is so very, very precious. Great write. I agree with Que and Chris. It does have a strong message for us all. Made me smile. :) |
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